Time Storm 2012: Atlantis and the Mayan Prophecy

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Product Description A science fiction mystery full of action, adventure and romance. Dr. Mark Turner, a scientist with a double Ph.D. in Oceanographic Seismology and Physics, will take you on this epic science fiction adventure. Will he make the ultimate sacrifice to save the world, or is it even possible? While doing research on the unusual occurrences in the Bermuda Triangle, he will uncover something that the government is willing to kill for… More >> Time Storm 2012: Atlantis and the Mayan Prophecy

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5 Responses to “Time Storm 2012: Atlantis and the Mayan Prophecy”

  1. S. O. MCDOUGAL says:
    January 3, 2010 at 1:12 am

    This book reads like a first draft. The plot is pretty good and the science (real or not) is interesting. But the dialog is primitive and the spelling, grammar, and punctuation are horrible. Interesting that the scientific explanations are better written than the dialog.

    If you can’t stand typos and commas in the wrong places, steer well clear of this book. Otherwise, you might enjoy the story. I’m just glad I bought the Kindle version–it really isn’t worth the price of the hardbound.

    I suspect the author self-published. If she wants to do this again, I advise her STRONGLY to join a writer’s group, listen closely to their critiques, and pay for a professional editor. Rating: 3 / 5

  2. Lauren Hancock says:
    January 3, 2010 at 2:48 am

    weak ending, and I quickly became tired reading the characters say ‘I love you’ over and over and over. Rating: 1 / 5

  3. N. Rathaus says:
    January 3, 2010 at 4:44 am

    I wish I hadn’t read it, the plot is silly, the dialogue repeats itself, one of the characters keeps biting her lower lip every 2-3 pages – wow what a suspense it creates – I “wonder why” this book only cost 0.99$, probably if I paid more I would ask for a refund. And the disaster that hits America, worries the characters as much as whether they are going to escape their captors, not to mention that none of the other people in the place they are at, appear to be concerned about their loved ones, or even their comrades which appear to have not contacted them for several days, I wonder what happened to them :) Rating: 1 / 5

  4. J. Field says:
    January 3, 2010 at 7:10 am

    I’m glad I bought the Kindle version of this book. I persisted, but was constantly dissapointed with the lack of editing throughout. The repetitive descriptions and unnecessary detail for minor points took away from what could have been a much more richly developed plot. Rating: 1 / 5

  5. DickyJoe says:
    January 3, 2010 at 7:44 am

    From page one, the poor writing was a turn-off. After forcing myself to read 14 pages, I couldn’t handle it any more: bad prose, uninteresting storyline. I just plain didn’t care. The sample excerpt on the Amazon page should have been warning enough. Rating: 1 / 5

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